advice on text game

[Olaf]

I feel I am getting better at texting, but I always like to improve. Here is a conversation with a girl I am texting and I would like to know what you guys think. Anything I should have done differently or could improve on? I am open for feedback, give it to me. 

 

oh yeah for context sake, this is in the middle of the conversation, I don't want to share everything online, but we talked about bubble tea and a lot of other stuff fyi

 

 

Edited 1 hour ago by Olaf