First video on new channel. Give me some feedback

[krockerman]

 

 

How hooked did you feel?

Did you understand the model?

Did the model make sense?

What flaws did you find in my model?

Did you understand all 5 steps/ways of using boundaries?

Did the escalation make sense?

If I where to redo the video. How would I do it better?

What problems/shortcomings did you find in my model?

[enchanted]

For now I would just work on getting the sound to be better cleaner and the background noise to be less

[Heaven]

Not too bad!

very good for a first video. Keep practicing and you’ll improve 

[Olaf]

First of all, good lenght of video, you could edit out more parts between talking. like cut out dead space of silence so it sounds more quick. What I do with my videos where I know they go viral. Is I think first for a day long about the best title and thumbnail. It can literally take multiple days to figure that out, but it is the most important thing. Then spend all your time only focusing on 3 things. thumbnail, title and first 30 seconds. This video's first 30 seconds there was no hook, I felt 0 emotion to wanting to watch the video further. And just for the sake of helping you I watched maybe 1 minute. If you don't want your face to be on it, it needs to also be more visual, I like to put in gifs in the video, maybe some music in the beginning. So when I talk about politics, I might put a photo of trump on it for 2 seconds. The video picture is now very static, just one video of a paper on it and your face not being on it is also not helping. Atleast when your face is on it there is more movement. Ultimately it is a video, not a audio, so the video needs to have movement and constant movement. Peoples attention span is very short. Anyways, think for a day or 2 days about a title and thumbnail, then workout a video around it. Optimise your thumbnail as much as possible. Work on the hook. Those are the main priorities for now. 

[integral]

1) Do work to improve the audio quality.
2) Use AI to animate what you're saying. So you could start with one of the images, but then have AI just design the animation after you record the audio and everything like that. You can also work with the AI to fix the audio.