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Blog post on Finance. Feedback needed!

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I've always been pretty shitty off financially. I've been a struggling entrepreneur for around 4 years now. Having wanting to be an entrepreneur since childhood, a childhood dream of mine.

Anyways a funny realization and here it is.

I live in a rental apartment. I like to travel.

As I was preparing financially for my future and my dreams and stuff I want to buy (maybe a house, maybe a car, maybe a sailboat, who knows?).

I realized that in my current situation if I wanted to for example move abroad.

It would make perfect sense for me to not lose the rental deal on my current apartment.

It would make perfect sense for me to have 2 apartments, if I decide to get a new one.

This might not make sense for you. It definitely doesn't for everyone.

I am not saying every person in the world should own 2 apartments.

I am saying I would be better off financially in case I decide to move.

I could instead keep renting this old apartment for example in AirBnB.

This is not always the case, and your mileage may wary.

As a general point if I am saying I did something, it doesn't NECESSARILY mean EVERYONE should do it.

Maybe U get shot in Alaska and U just happen to have Heroin with you and you have to perform an emergency surgery on your foot.

I would take some heroin at that point.

I am not necessarily arguing you should be taking heroin tho. I have personally never done it and never would. I don't see it as a conscious behavior.

Unselfish people live in Heaven.

Selfish people live in Hell.

The choice was made by God.

You don't have to make it.

It was made for You.

However, maybe Life holds something very beautiful for you out there.

Maybe you have just looked into the wrong direction?

Outside?

or

Inside?

I wonder what is being said when one says the words "Spiritual Ecstasy"

Why did they come up with that word?

What did they need the word for?U

What is it pointing at?

Until next time,

Don Aapo

 

 

 

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okay guys, what did u think of it?

I would love some feedback as I'm trying to make money using these blog posts along with other content I'm posting on my WordPress blog and my social media (Instagram and TikTok)

blog - https://aapo.blog/

instagram - https://www.instagram.com/don_aapo/

tiktok - https://www.tiktok.com/@don_aapo


https://aapo.blog/

my personal website-actualized since 2015-just waiting for the day-we have the first guys on the forum

born on 2015 :P

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Too short, very close to being what Google would consider thin content, which puts it at risk of getting deranked. I would aim for at least 500 words on each blog post.

Multiple grammar and punctuation issues, awkward phrasing.

Very all over the place. I wouldn't consider it a blog post on finance. You mention less about finance than heaven, hell, and heroin.

Not SEO-friendly, no keywords, so it's going to be hard to get organic views from search engines to monetize it.

Mixing English and Finnish isn't good for your brand. If you want to write and do TikToks/Instagram posts in both, make two separate accounts on each platform and two websites (or at least have separate sections of your site for English and Finnish.)

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On 18/05/2022 at 3:22 AM, Yarco said:

Too short, very close to being what Google would consider thin content, which puts it at risk of getting deranked. I would aim for at least 500 words on each blog post.

Multiple grammar and punctuation issues, awkward phrasing.

Very all over the place. I wouldn't consider it a blog post on finance. You mention less about finance than heaven, hell, and heroin.

Not SEO-friendly, no keywords, so it's going to be hard to get organic views from search engines to monetize it.

Mixing English and Finnish isn't good for your brand. If you want to write and do TikToks/Instagram posts in both, make two separate accounts on each platform and two websites (or at least have separate sections of your site for English and Finnish.)

Thanks for the feedback.

Would you like to show me your work so I can learn?

Don Aapo


https://aapo.blog/

my personal website-actualized since 2015-just waiting for the day-we have the first guys on the forum

born on 2015 :P

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Two accounts sounds good but I might be more interested right now in helping local enterpreneurs with their WordPress needs.

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Would love to see a work by you too man!

https://aapo.blog/

my personal website-actualized since 2015-just waiting for the day-we have the first guys on the forum

born on 2015 :P

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