jimwell

A Poem I Must Unleash

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The sun is about to rise and I'm about to sleep. But here's a poem I must unleash:

 

The sun rises.

I rest.

But light floods my mind,

and I must speak.

 

I AM GOD.

The you and You are one.

The self and Self are one.

The ego and God are one.

 

Only God exists.

The limited is the unlimited.

The relative is the absolute.

The self is the Self.

The human is the God.

 

Call it belief.

Call it intuition.

Call it nothing at all.

It is my knowing.

And that is enough.

 

From this moment,

my thoughts,

my decisions,

my actions,

my existence

flow from these truths.

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The lilt of lovely words has been unleashed to assault my visage. It dissolves into the rich horizons that make up the mind 😀

Thank you for sharing! Poetry is an art. I read it when I need inspiration.

Sleep well 💤 


Deal with the issue now, on your terms, in your control. Or the issue will deal with you, in ways you won't appreciate, and cannot control.

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On 9/13/2025 at 5:36 AM, Natasha Tori Maru said:

Thank you for sharing! Poetry is an art. I read it when I need inspiration.

Sleep well 💤 

I'm glad you felt the inspiration I felt. :)

 

On 9/13/2025 at 5:36 AM, Natasha Tori Maru said:

The lilt of lovely words has been unleashed to assault my visage. It dissolves into the rich horizons that make up the mind

That response gave me a flash of nearsightedness and turned me into a mini-researcher. I leaned closer to the display, straining to catch the phrase before chasing down its meaning.

For future reference, here's the meaning:

" Phrase-by-Phrase Breakdown
- “The lilt of lovely words”  
  Lilt suggests a musical rise and fall, a rhythm or melody. So this points to words that are not just spoken but sung, flowing with beauty and cadence.

- “has been unleashed to assault my visage”  
  Unleashed implies a sudden release of force. Assault my visage means the words strike directly at the speaker’s face—metaphorically, they overwhelm the senses, almost like a flood of sound and meaning hitting them head-on.

- “It dissolves into the rich horizons”  
  After the initial impact, the words don’t vanish; they dissolve—they spread, seep, and blend into something larger. Rich horizons suggests vastness, depth, and possibility.

- “that make up the mind”  
  The horizons are not external landscapes but the inner expanse of thought, imagination, and memory. The words become part of the mental world, shaping perception and consciousness.

Overall Meaning
The passage describes the transformative power of language. Beautiful words first strike the senses with force, almost overwhelming, but then they melt into the vast inner landscape of the mind, expanding thought and imagination. It’s about how language moves from sound (external, sensory) to meaning (internal, mental), leaving a lasting imprint."

Edited by jimwell
Meaning provided by AI

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On 9/13/2025 at 3:08 PM, Jehovah increases said:

Beautifully said.

Because God is beauty. ;)

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You failed to comprehend the depth of poetry. Poetry can be so deep and complex; it even encompasses the listing of facts.

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I think I remember you. You used to be a musician. Perhaps you still are. 

Music and poetry make a good tango. You should know.

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Hmm... Yes, I heard the melody because I'm at a hotel right now and there was a musician playing live acoustic music just a few steps from me. They call this a synchronicity.

I'm not joking.

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Or perhaps you actually know that I'm at a hotel, listening to live acoustic music. Regardless, it's an amazing synchronicity. I have become more of a New Ager. xD

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This is what a real prayer is; the true essence of Christianity before corruption.

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